100 Word Challenge #49 I was so cross that…

It was a day like any a day and  I was at the table eating breakfast with my family when all of a sudden my sister spilled her juice on me. I was so cross that I screamed and yelled at my sister.

“I’m sorry, I didn’t mean it,” my sister protested.
“YES, YOU DID!!!” I screeched.
“No, I didn’t,” she replied.

“Kids stop fighting,” dad said.
“Or no ice-cream,” mum threatened.

“OK mum we won’t do it anymore,” we said in unison.
We finished our breakfast and slouched off to our bedrooms to get ready for school.

2 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge #49 I was so cross that…”

  1. Well written Callum.
    I really like the way you have used so many different variations on the word “said”. Each one (threatened, protested, screeched, replied, said in unison) conveys a very different mood or feeling. I wonder if there are other ways you can share these different feelings?

  2. Hi Callum,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    I think I’d be cross as well if my sister spilled her juice on me.
    I love how “ice-cream” always solves all problems!
    Good work this week.
    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)


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