- Hey Igor,
I like how you added real facts. It is a good technique to use.
- Hi Emily,
I like your 100 WC. I like how you used interesting words. Something you could work on is to check your spelling on some words.
- Hey Hamish,
I like your 100WC. I like how you had it about a birthday party that has gone wrong. Something you could work on is to add paragraphs.