Comments I Gave

  1. Hey Igor,

    I like how you added real facts. It is a good technique to use.

  2. Hi Emily,

    I like your 100 WC. I like how you used interesting words. Something you could work on is to check your spelling on some words.

  3. Hey Hamish,

    I like your 100WC. I like how you had it about a birthday party that has gone wrong. Something you could work on is to add paragraphs.

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