- Hey Deylan,I liked your 100 WC. It had some interesting words in it. Something you could work on is to check your spelling on some of the words.
- Hi Emily,
I really liked your 100 WC. I liked how you wrote it in the perspective of the statue. I also liked how you added about the problem of polluting the earth. There is not really much to work on. Good job.
- Hi Charlotte,
I like how you wrote your 100 WC in a poem. It is a really good technique to use. There isn’t anything you could work on.
- Hey Hamish,
I liked how you wrote your 100 WC as a poem. I also liked how you ended on a question. I don’t have anything you could work on.
- Hey Igor,
I like your story. I like how you added a sport and how the dominos fall from the sky. There nothing much you can work on.