Comments

  1. Hey Deylan,I liked your 100 WC. It had some interesting words in it. Something you could work on is to check your spelling on some of the words.
  2. Hi Emily,

    I really liked your 100 WC. I liked how you wrote it in the perspective of the statue. I also liked how you added about the problem of polluting the earth. There is not really much to work on. Good job.

  3. Hi Charlotte,

    I like how you wrote your 100 WC in a poem. It is a really good technique to use. There isn’t anything you could work on.

  4. Hey Hamish,

    I liked how you wrote your 100 WC as a poem. I also liked how you ended on a question. I don’t have anything you could work on.

  5. Hey Igor,

    I like your story. I like how you added a sport and how the dominos fall from the sky. There nothing much you can work on.

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