100 Word Challenge But How Did She Get Up There?

This week my goal is to add short and long sentences.

It was finally Easter. I went downstairs to start collecting my chocolate eggs. As soon as I found them all I took them upstairs and put them on top of my cupboard where no one will find them. I went down to breakfast which of course was eggs. It was a great easter. Then we went to a park to roll our painted eggs down a hill. When we got back I headed straight to my room to get my eggs to nibble on. When I got to my room I was shocked. Someone had eaten all of my eggs. I knew it was my sister. “ But how did she get up there?” I screamed.


One Comment
  1. Hello, I liked how you didn’t make it so crazy and used correct punctuation. Maybe you could improve on making the topic sentence relate more to the story.

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