- Hey Hamish,
I really liked your 100-word challenge. I liked how you used descriptive words. You could work on maybe make the part about the fish make more sense.
- Hey Matt,
I really enjoyed your story. There were a few mistakes that you should fix up but other than that I was really good.
- Hi Sophie,
I liked your story. There were a few mistakes like you forgot to add talking marks but other than that I really liked it.
- Hey Jeyda,
I really liked your story. I like how you added action words like scoot. The part about the transparent sock didn’t really make sense. Other than that it was really good.