100 Word Challenge #54 … as I turned my head, the world spun

My blood was pumping. I couldn’t see them but I knew I had to keep running. My TARDIS (Time And Relative Dimension In Space) came looming in on the horizon.

I fumbled my key into the slot and jumped in. I jumped onto the controls and plugged in co-ordinates.
“Wooshh! Wooshh! Wooshh” my TARDIS slowly faded away from view.

A few minutes later…

I opened the door and climbed out. As I turned my head, the world spun. I hadn’t quite got the hang of the whole idea of time travel yet. I walked on to see what alien was in store for me.

One Comment
  1. Really cleverly written, Callum. I guess time travel would really mess with your head.You created the tension beautifully in the first sentences, drawing the reader in on the journey, running in a panic towards safety. Well done!

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